Computer-science script consulting

Technical authenticity without an exposition tax.

Review technology-driven scripts for credibility, clarity and overlooked dramatic opportunity while protecting the voice and momentum of the project.

A consultant should improve the scene, not merely correct it

The goal is not to turn a screenplay into documentation. It is to identify where a technical shortcut breaks audience trust, where a more accurate constraint creates better tension and where a complicated concept can be expressed through behavior rather than explanation.

Review areas

  • Artificial intelligence, machine learning, agents and automation.
  • Software systems, cloud infrastructure, identity, permissions and cybersecurity.
  • Data, algorithms, prediction, surveillance and decision systems.
  • Technology dialogue, interface behavior and on-screen workflows.
  • Continuity between technical rules, plot turns and character decisions.

Designed for the development process

Reviews can be scoped to a treatment, screenplay, pilot, episode, production draft or series bible. Notes distinguish factual problems from creative choices, prioritize issues by story impact and provide alternatives that remain playable on screen.

What executives receive

A concise risk and opportunity assessment: what audiences may question, which rules need clarification, where the premise can support more story and what production departments need to understand early.

Pressure-test the technology before the audience does.

Request a focused script review or an ongoing advisory role.

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